Thursday, June 10, 2021
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Kia ora Lily - wow, such a fabulous piece of descriptive writing! I like how you highlighted some of the text. It was such an effective addition to your writing - really giving some importance to the scene you were setting. I wonder what happened to this ship caught in the storm? Did it stay intact? Maybe you could add this to your writing. Take care. Jen TA
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